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W.9-10.3.a-e: Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured even sequences
Rubric Code: BX7C738
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 9-12

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Exceeds

(N/A)

3

Meets

(N/A)

2

Approaching

(N/A)

1

Developing

(N/A)

Ideas: Engage & Orient

Narrator: Point of View
Protagonist/Antagonist
Setting: Where/When
Conflict: Problem

4

__ An engaging narrator pulls the reader into story
__ A compelling protagonist puts a "face" to the story
__ A convincing setting has been "drawn" for readers
__ An intriguing problem or conflict has set the story in motion
3

__ A narrator has been established (P.O.V)
__ At least one character has been introduced
__ A setting has been established
__ A situation has been set up: problem/conflict
2

__ Some confusion about who is narrating (P.O.V.)
__ Mention of people, but not quite "characters"
__ Few details offered to give sense of setting
__ Conflict that moves story is unclear or underdeveloped
1

__ Who is narrating?
__ Hard to tell the characters apart from each other.
__ What's the setting?
__ What problem/conflict is driving this story?
Narrative Techniques

RIGHT WORDS: How hard have you tried to find the best way to say what you want to say?

4

__ Dialogue is distinctive and gives "voice" to each character; drives action
__ Vivid description uses precise sensory language and clever words/phrases to develop a picture of character, setting & events
3

__ Dialogue has been used to develop character & further action
__ Description includes sensory language and carefully chosen words & phrases that develop a "picture" of character, setting & events
2

__ Dialogue is written in a way that it leaves reader unsure: who's talking? what does dialogue add to story?
__ Descriptions are basic and leave the reader struggling to fill in details to "picture" character, setting, etc.
1

__ Where's the dialogue?
__ I'm having a really hard time "seeing" most of what you're trying to show for character, setting, action, etc.
Sequence/Organization

BEST ORDER: Have things/events been introduced into your story in an order that helps the story make sense...and feel resolved by the end?

4

__ Events are sequenced in a way that seems both natural and most logical
__ Resolution: Every element of story seems accounted for--yes, even if it could have ended differently, this answers all my questions!
3

__ Event sequences are well-structured
__ Resolution: All elements of storyline eventually make sense and there is a sense of closure (if present, cliffhanger is set up well)
2

__ Event sequences are sometimes hard to follow
__ Resolution: Some elements of story seem to be resolved, but there are too many unanswered questions to feel a sense of closure (possibly you have a cliffhanger you haven't clearly set up?)
1

__ I'm confused by what is happening; can you map this out for me?
__ There are too many unanswered questions. Is the problem really "resolved"?
__ If not, are you sure you've given a clear set-up for a sequel?
Conventions

__ Errors in spelling
__ Proper punctuation
__ Dialogue format
__ Grammatical Usage
__ Verb tense
__ Pronouns
__ Sent. fragments
__ Run-on sent.
__Capitalization
__ Spacing/format

4

__ Writing has been accurately proofread for all points on Conventions List (on left): Errors are so few they do not slow the reading; very little need for editing.
3

__ Writing has been proofread for all points on Conventions List (on left):
Errors do not seriously slow reading; moderate need for editing.
2

__ Writing may or may not have been proofread for all points on Conventions List (on left): Errors are significant enough to slow readability; substantial need for editing.
1

__ Writing does not seem to have been proofread for all points on Conventions List (on left): Numerous errors repeatedly distract the reader and make the text difficult to read; need for extensive editing.
Planning/Evaluation tool

This refers to BOTH sides of your organizer: Elements of a Short Story; includes self-evaluation Qs, AND this rubric with points checked

4

__ All parts of Plot Outline have been thoroughly completed
__ 90-100% of plot elements have been clearly and correctly identified
__ Thoughtful effort has been made to answer all
self-evaluation questions
3

__ All parts of Plot Outline have been completed
__ At least 80% of plot elements have been correctly identified
__ Effort has clearly been made to answer all self-evaluation questions
2

__ Some parts of Plot Outline have not been completed
__ Less than 80% of plot elements have been correctly identified
__ Some effort has been made to answer self-evaluation questions
1

__ Plot Outline is missing or barely/not filled out
__ Self-evaluation is missing or little thought has been given to filling it out




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