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Tolerance Progressive Essay 
An essay which includes all of the three main types of writing: narration, informative/explanatory, and argument. This particular essay will relate to the theme of tolerance.
Rubric Code: ZXX3A8A
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 9-12

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  Mastery or Above

4 pts

Proficiency

3 pts

Partial Proficiency

2 pts

No Evidence of Achievement

1 pts

Narrative Section
This section of your essay tells a story. It places a character in a tolerance-related situation.
Narrative Writing Learning Target

I can organize narrative writing that develops real or imagined experience or events. (W.9-10.3)

Mastery or Above

In addition to meeting Proficiency:
- Uses more complex narrative structures: dialogue, suspense, flashback, and/or multiple plot lines
- Includes exceptional use of sensory detail and description; highly descriptive throughout
- Is obvious that thought was given to choosing words that were "just right" for the narrative; no empty adjectives or flat, uninteresting verbs
Proficiency

Narrative Section:
- Catches and holds our attention
- Has strong character(s) and clear setting
- Has effective and organized plot or timeline of events
- Clearly deals with a tolerance-based theme
- Contains specific words and vivid details
- Comes to a satisfying and believable conclusion
- Transitions smoothly to next section
Partial Proficiency

Narrative Section:
- Briefly tells a tolerance-related story
- May have a somewhat confusing or incomplete plot or timeline of events
- Isn't very descriptive
- Doesn't have a clear ending and/or doesn't transition well into next section
No Evidence of Achievement

Narrative Section:
- Doesn't tell a clear story
- Is very confusing or is obviously incomplete
- Doesn't clearly relate to a tolerance-based theme
Informative/Explanatory Section
This section of your essay provides factual information about your chosen topic. It explains the issue as it exists in the world today.
Inf./Expl. Writing Learning Target

I can organize informative/explanatory writing to introduce a topic and communicate, examine and/or analyze my presented information thoroughly. (W.9-10.2)

Mastery or Above

In addition to meeting Proficiency:
- Topic is dealt with in great detail
- Multiple perspectives or viewpoints may be presented (if applicable)
- Includes graphics (graphs, charts, illustrations, diagrams, photographs, etc.)
Proficiency

Informative/Explanatory Section:
- Includes relevant, well-chosen facts; concrete details; and quotations that increase the reader's knowledge on the topic
- Provides required definitions and explanations to clarify topic
- Comes to a logical conclusion
- Transitions smoothly to next section
Partial Proficiency

Informative/Explanatory Section:
- Is on topic, but facts, details, and quotations are commonplace; they don't provide much information
- Information is sometimes difficult to follow or understand
- Doesn't have a clear ending and/or does not transition well into next section
No Evidence of Achievement

Informative/Explanatory Section:
- Information is disorganized, not well-chosen, and possibly off-topic all together
- Is highly confusing or obviously incomplete
Argumentative Section
This section of your essay presents an argument about why and how this issue needs to be addressed and/or solved. You must present the best solution to the problem.
Argumentative Wtg Learning Target

I can organize argumentative writing to present my claim(s) and distinguish them from alternate or opposing claims, counterclaims, and evidence. (W.9-10.1)

Mastery or Above

In addition to meeting Proficiency:
- Includes and discredits/disproves counter claims; explains why chosen solution is superior to other alternatives
Proficiency

Argumentative Section:
- Clearly states claim (proposed solution) and provides evidence/arguments to support the claim
- Transitions smoothly from one argument or piece of evidence to the next
- Comes to a logical conclusion that supports the argument
Partial Proficiency

Argumentative Section:
- Has a wishy-washy or unclear claim
- Attempts to support claim, but arguments aren't strong enough or convincing enough
- Doesn't have a clear ending and/or does not transition well into next section
No Evidence of Achievement

Argumentative Section:
- Contains opinions, not arguments; is biased
- Is disorganized, off-topic, or illogical
- Is overly confusing and/or obviously incomplete
Citation of Sources
All sources need to be cited in your bibliography. Also, all sources need to be internally cited in your essay (whether paraphrased or directly quoted).
Citation Writing Learning Target

I can create a bibliography using MLA or APA guidelines. (W.9-10.8)

Mastery or Above

- Bibliography contains more than three sources
-Bibliography is annotated; includes a brief summary for each entry
-Both of the above
Proficiency

- At least three sources are cited correctly in bibliography
- Bibliography is formatted correctly
Partial Proficiency

- Fewer then three sources were used but were cited correctly
- Three sources were used but were cited incorrectly
- Bibliography is not formatted correctly
No Evidence of Achievement

- No bibliography
- Major errors in citation; unable to determine sources used
Citation Writing Learning Target

I can insert parenthetical citations using MLA or APA guidelines. (W.9-10.8)

Mastery or Above

- Citations from more than three sources are included
- Paraphrasing and direct quotes are used in the essay
- At least one extended quotation (longer than 4 lines) may be included and is formatted/punctuated correctly
Proficiency

- Essay includes citations from all three sources
- Internal citations are included and are formatted/punctuated correctly
Partial Proficiency

- Citations from all sources are not included
- Internal citations contain errors in formatting/punctuation
No Evidence of Achievement

- Few or no citations are included from sources
- No credit is given to sources; student has plagiarized (including copy/pasting from the Internet)




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