iRubric: Writing from another character's perspective rubric

The character's point of view is not evident in the scene.

An attempt has been made to show what happened from the character's point of view, but it doesn't reflect the speaker's personality.

It is evident that the interpretation of the scene now reflects the character's personality.

The writer made no attempt to show not tell; or made no attempt to use better verbs; total absence of dialog; or no similes.

The writer attempted to use vivid action verbs; told rather than showed ; did not use at least one simile; or did not use dialog when appropriate.

The writer used vivid action verbs; effectively showed, not told; dialog was used when appropriate, and at least one simile was used.

The character perspective doesn't follow the original events of the story.

The character perspective contains some details from the story.

The character perspective contains many details from the story and imagines what the character is feeling beyond the events of the story.