I could use this as an example to others.
20 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
15 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
10 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
5 pts
Not present in narrative
0 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish. The events are in order / make sense.
Hooks reader and introduces story
Specific verbs and adjectives show rather than tell the story.
Closes the story.
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.