I could use this as an example to others.
10 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
8 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
6 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
5 pts
Not present in narrative
0 pts
The writer tells the story from start to finish
Writer conveys a strong sense of the person they were before they accomplished goal.
Story should have "flow" description of one
At the end of the narrative reader should see how the experience changed the author.
One person from the story is described in detail.
One place or setting from the story is described in vivid detail.
One moment from the story is described in vivid and compelling detail.
Grammar punctuation, dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.
Formating is done according to MLA standards