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Kroc Profile Personality Profile of Ray Kroc. Quotes were provided and you had plenty of other sources to pull from. Remember find interesting quotes and build around them. My example profile is on OneView DO NOT ATTEMPT TO MIMICK MINE. It can certainly have the same feel, but do not make a carbon copy. Take your time and make these good. The word count is 600 minimum and they will be due the 13th and 14th of September. I expect to see some rough drafts in class and also to hear some questions. Rubric Code: UX8BC96 By jordanj24 Draft Public Rubric Subject: Journalism Type: Writing Grade Levels: 9-12

Kroc Personality Profile
	Poor 10 pts	Fair 15 pts	Good 20 pts
Quotes	Poor Less than five quotes were used AND none of the quotes stood alone.	Fair Less than five quotes were used OR at least one did not stand alone.	Good Five quotes were used AND all of them stood alone
Attribution	Poor When giving attribution to quotes using 'said' correctly is still an evident problem throughout the paper.	Fair MOST times attribution was done correctly with the use of 'said.'	Good All quotes were attributed with the correct use of 'said.'
Transitions	Poor Transitions had an obvious issue and did not lead into quotes with purpose.	Fair MOST quotes had strong transitions leading into them, but some missed the mark.	Good A clear grasp on how transitions should be used is evident and each transition led into a quote properly and a connection between the two was evident.
Introduction/Lead	Poor Lead was not well written, failed to grab reader's attention and did not relate to the profile.	Fair Lead was well written,and grabbed reader's attention, but lacked connection to what the profile actually highlighted.	Good Lead was interesting and grabbed the reader's attention. ALSO it related to what the profile was about.
Spelling and Style	Poor ALL spelling is TWO points each (THIS INCLUDES INCORRECTLY CAPITALIZED WORDS) and style errors are one point each (this includes missing commas PAY ATTENTION TO COMMAS IN ATTRIBUTION)	Fair ALL spelling is TWO points each (THIS INCLUDES INCORRECTLY CAPITALIZED WORDS) and style errors are one point each (this includes missing commas PAY ATTENTION TO COMMAS IN ATTRIBUTION)	Good ALL spelling is TWO points each (THIS INCLUDES INCORRECTLY CAPITALIZED WORDS) and style errors are one point each (this includes missing commas PAY ATTENTION TO COMMAS IN ATTRIBUTION)