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Draft and "Big Revisions" Assessing first draft plus first revision attempts. Does piece have basic elements of memoir (personal narrative) including focused event or time period, a story that makes sense, and deeper meaning or life lesson that readers can interpret. Rubric Code: HXXW23X By trishtarver Ready to use Public Rubric Subject: English Type: Assessment Grade Levels: 6-8

Memoir early draft/revision
	Developing 10 pts	Fair 15 pts	Good 20 pts
Setting	Developing Memoir is written as a story with details that do not add to the setting or story.	Fair Memoir is written as a story with a limited sense of or description of the setting.	Good Memoir is written as a story with a clear sense of setting, using sensory language and/or highly descriptive details.
Focused on one event or time period	Developing Memoir has no actual event or experience to focus the story around. Contains mostly descriptions.	Fair Memoir is written about an event or experience, but does not focus enough on one important part.	Good Memoir is written about an experience that takes place as a single event or focused time period: a day, few hours, or moment.
Importance, meaning, or life lesson	Developing Memoir does not express meaningfulness, importance, or significance in the writer's life.	Fair Memoir expresses that an experience was exciting or special, but does not tie back to the life of the reader in a deep, meaningful way.	Good Memoir expresses a deeper meaning, the importance of an event, or even a lesson learned or reflection about the experience.
Story structure	Developing Memoir is not written with a beginning, middle and end or a sense of narrative structure.	Fair Memoir is written with a limited sense of a beginning, middle and end and may have some elements of the narrative structure.	Good Memoir is written as a story with a clear sense of beginning, middle, and end that makes sense to the reader.
Evidence of revision	Developing Writer provides little to no evidence of any revisions to original draft.	Fair Writer provides evidence of 1 revision to original draft. For example: Add or enhance details of setting Add or enhance details of character development (thoughts, feelings, etc.) Remove unneeded or uninteresting details Made meaningfulness more clear, or added reflection	Good Writer provides evidence of 2 revisions to original draft. For example: Significantly enhance details of setting Significantly enhance details of character development (thoughts, feelings, etc.) Remove unneeded or uninteresting details Made meaningfulness more clear, or added reflection