Your writing was VERY clear
Your writing was MOSTLY clear
Your writing WASN'T VERY CLEAR
Your writing NEEDS MORE WORK
What is the most important idea you want to talk about in your paper?
Did you use FACTS/EXAMPLES/REASONS to support your main idea?
Did you add a strong title AND indent your paragraphs?
How can you summarize everything you said in your paragraph?
How can you use new vocabulary and phrases to improve your writing? (Hint: your words paint a clear picture in the reader's mind)
Have you used capitalization where necessary ? Do all sentences have correct punctuation? Did you check your spelling?