I could use this as an example to others.
4 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
3 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
2 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
1 pts
Not present in narrative
0 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish
Writer is able to produce a well written introductory sentence.
Experience should have meaning
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.
Writer wrote three complete paragraphs.