Humanities Freedom/Privacy/Resp/Acc
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Minds Blown
Exceeds the Standard
97 pts
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Minds Open
Meets the Standard
85 pts
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Minds Jostled
Partially Meets the Standard
65 pts
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Minds the Gap
Does Not Yet Meet the Standard
50 pts
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Thematic Statement
To what extent does your product explain your thematic statement ? (SOCIAL STUDIES)
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I love how you demonstrate developed, engaging, meaningful thinking around your thematic statement through your product.
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I like how you demonstrate meaningful thinking around your thematic statement through your product.
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I noticed that your product seems to be going through the motions - done for the sake of done. How you might you better demonstrate your thinking around a thematic statement?
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What's up? I noticed your product didn't seem to have much to do with any of the essential questions. How can I help?
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Connections
To what extent does your product and/or reflection connect to the unit texts (READING)
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I love how your product and/or reflection incorporates a wide variety and/or unique, insightful connections to the unit texts.
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I like how your product and/or reflection incorporates public evidence connections to the unit texts
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I noticed that your product or your reflection doesn't seem to be connected to the texts. Where might you find more usable evidence as defined during our class work?
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What's up? You made a paper mache Statue of Liberty and scale model of Ellis Island out of LEGO bricks. Why? How can I help?
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Media Effectiveness
To what extent does your product demonstrate effective media design?
(MEDIA)
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I love how your product uses text/music/video/color/design to enhance the meaning in unique, engaging ways
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I like how your product uses text/music/video /color/design to support the meaning
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I noticed how the text/music/video /color/design somewhat distracts from the meaning. How might you CRAPify your design?
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What's up? This thing is in blaze orange comic sans font? Why? And why are there clips of giant cats in the middle of it? How can I help?
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Hook Intro
To what extent does your intro grab your reader's attention?
(WRITING)
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I love you crafted a powerful, interesting, and/or engaging hook that makes the reader want to know more about your topic
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I like how you crafted a useful introduction that makes the reader want to know more about your topic
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I noticed that your intro seemed pretty generic. How might you better get your reader's attention?
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What's up? You used some super cliches here and it just isn't making your reader want to keep going. How can I help?
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Project Reflection
How well have you described the process, content, and outcome of your project? (WRITING)
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I love how you use specific examples to show your process of developing your project. I'm impressed by your honesty, how your thinking goes to the next level beyond the surface answers, and your writing voice.
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I like that you use specific examples to show your process of developing your project. I'm pleased that you included enough details to make each section clear. Your voice feels ordinary, but harmless.
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I noticed you didn't seem to include many details in your reflection. How do you feel about your over project? What details were important to you getting this far with it? How might you add some personality to your essay?
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What's up? This doesn't seem to be discuss processes, content or outcomes. It's hard to tell what you've done here. How can I help you back on track?
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Vocabulary
To what extent do you use vocabulary in your product?<BR>
(ELA VOCAB)
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I love how you effectively use 6 or more roots-based words throughout your products/reflection.
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I like how you effectively use 5 roots-based vocab words through your products/reflections.
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I noticed you effectively use only 4 found roots-based words. How might you find other unknown and helpful words in the reading(s)?
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What's up? It seems you think vocab is for dweebs and dumb people and stuff. How can I help you find the vocab you plan to use in your products?
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Creating/Imagining/Innovating
To what extent did your product demonstrate creative/imaginative/innovative problem solving?
(ACADEMIC INITIATIVE/HoM)
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I love how unique your project turned out. You made something innovative and solved the problems in interesting ways.
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I like how you completed the project you set out to create. You solved the problems you encountered and it's interesting to look at.
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I noticed that your product doesn't demonstrate much original thought -- it is done, but that's the extent of creativity evident. How might you push yourself next time to make something more original/ambitious?
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What's up? Yes, it's a thing. How can I help you make things that get people thinking?
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Perisistence
To what extent did you follow through on your project even when things got tough? (ACADEMIC INITIATIVE/HoM)
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I love how you kept working even when things got difficult and found solutions to the problems you encountered.
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I like how you were open to suggestions when you ran into trouble and then kept going to the finish.
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I noticed that you seemed to give up several times during the project and needed quite a bit of coaxing. How might you keep yourself motivated to keep going?
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What's up? Your project is something of a heap and you seemed to disappear from it. How can I help?
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Professional Quality
How professional does your product look in terms of MUGS and aesthetic (looks) quality?<BR>
(MUGS)
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I love how your work is free of errors and that your MUGS are so strong you have a unique and powerful style developing here.
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I like that your work is free of errors. (Or at least free of ones that I noticed.)
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I noticed a lot of errors that distracted me from your ideas and thinking. How might you revise? What tools could you use to help you spell and grammar check?
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What's up? Y u no use spl chk? It feels like you may not have even taken the time to check it out. How can I help you with your MUGS?
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Timeliness/Managing Impulsivity
How On Time Was Your Project?<BR>
(ACADEMIC INITIATIVE)
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I love how you turned your products in on time -- even earlier!
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I like how you turned your products in by the end of the day after the due date. That's only one day late and that's okay.
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I noticed your products were passed in up to one week late. What caused it to be so late? How might you keep that from happening again?
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What's up? Your product was passed in more than one week late. How might we keep this from happening again?
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