PACE I Am Hero
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Luke Skywalker
Exceeds the Standard
97 pts
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Indiana Jones
Meets the Standard
85 pts
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Howard the Duck
Partially Meets the Standard
65 pts
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Jar Jar . . . ugh . . .
Does Not Yet Meet the Standard
50 pts
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Essential Question
How well does your product answer the essential question "How do our life experiences connect us to the heroic monomyth?" <BR>
(ELA Reading)
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I love how you answer one or more essential questions by showcasing unique and powerful insights and including rich evidence to back up your thinking. I'm impressed that you took your thinking to the next level.
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I like how you answer the essential question by including relevant insights and enough evidence to back up your thinking. I'm pleased to see you accomplished the task at hand.
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It seems your product has not answered the question completely -- yet. I can see some interesting things happening. How might you include more evidence to back up your ideas? How else might you answer the essential question?
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What's up? I think you spent too much time watching the original Footloose and singing "I'm Holding Out for a Hero" rather than working on this project. How can I help?
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Heroic Cycle/Monomyth
To what extent does your product clearly demonstrate your/your character's experiences in the heroic cycle?<BR>
(ELA MEDIA/WRITING)
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I love how your product clearly conveys your/your character's experience in the heroic cycle and does so in a unique, clever, and/or original way
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I like how your product clearly conveys your/your character's experience in the heroic cycle. I'm pleased to see you accomplished the task at hand.
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Product conveys your/your character's experience in the heroic cycle but leaves more questions than answers and requires additional explanation. What changes would you make to the project at this point? Would a review of heroic cycle help?
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What's up? This feels more like you are struggling with mono than discussing heroes. How can I help?
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Vocabulary
To what extent do you use found vocabulary in your product?<BR>
(ELA VOCAB)
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I love how you effectively use 6 or more found vocab words throughout your project.
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I like how you effectively use 5 found vocab words
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I noticed you effectively use only 4 found vocab words or I noticed you had to use the words I provided you. How might you find other unknown and helpful words in the reading(s)?
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What's up? It seems you think vocab is for dweebs and dumb people and stuff. How can I help you find the vocab you plan to use in your project?
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Project Reflection
How well have you described the process, content, and outcome of your project? (WRITING)
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I love how you use specific examples to show your process of developing your project. I'm impressed by your honesty, how your thinking goes to the next level beyond the surface answers, and your writing voice.
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I like that you use specific examples to show your process of developing your project. I'm pleased that you included enough details to make each section clear. Your voice feels ordinary, but harmless.
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I noticed you didn't seem to include many details in your reflection. How do you feel about your over project? What details were important to you getting this far with it? How might you add some personality to your essay?
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What's up? This doesn't seem to be discuss processes, content or outcomes. It's hard to tell what you've done here. How can I help you back on track?
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Professional Quality
How professional does your product look in terms of MUGS and aesthetic (looks) quality?<BR>
(MUGS)
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I love how your work is free of errors and that your MUGS are so strong you have a unique and powerful style developing here.
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I like that your work is free of errors. (Or at least free of ones that I noticed.)
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I noticed a lot of errors that distracted me from your ideas and thinking. How might you revise? What tools could you use to help you spell and grammar check?
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What's up? Y u no use spl chk? It feels like you may not have even taken the time to check it out. How can I help you with your MUGS?
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Timeliness
How On Time Was Your Project?<BR>
(ACADEMIC INITIATIVE)
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I love how you turned your product in on time -- even earlier!
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I like how you turned your product by the end of the day after the due date. That's only one day late and that's okay.
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I noticed your product is passed in up to one week late. What caused it to be so late? How might you keep that from happening again?
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What's up? Your product was passed in more than one week late. How might we keep this from happening again?
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