I could use this as an example to others.
8 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
6 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
4 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
2 pts
Not present in narrative
0 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience
Hooks reader and introduces character, setting, and story
Strong verbs and sensory adjectives add to the story
Satisfying ending to story
Spelling, punctuating, and basic sentence formatting