I could use this as an example to others.
10 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
9 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
8 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
7 pts
Not present in narrative
0 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience
Hooks reader and introduces story
Specifics verbs and adjectives add to the story
Experience should have meaning
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.