I could use this as an example to others.
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This is what I expect to get from students
Not quite what I was hoping for
You missed this and should see me for help
The writer used the writing process including: pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and publishing.
Hooks reader and introduces story
Uses word choice that allows reader to see and feel the experience, not just be told.
Writer is able to close the paper
Capitalization and punctuating
Spelling
Correct usage of grammar